不够简洁。
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送交者: LB 于 2015-12-15, 11:33:04:
回答: 献丑 - 我写的英语 由 梅子 于 2015-12-14, 19:51:49:
第一段:
- ‘For me' - 多余
- ‘is not just a character in a novel’ - 多余,everyone knows that
- ‘endure against’ - against 多余
- ‘conservative southern American society’ - 多余, 让人误以为南美,just ‘American south' or simply 'south'.
- ‘fight for the life she wants’ - 多余, just 'fight'
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