送交者: claudius 于 2005-1-19, 05:18:26:
回答: fagus 英文可能不够读偶blog 的程度 由 xj 于 2005-1-18, 20:19:23:
The first paragraph:
"News about the death of Mr. Zhao Zi Yang, the former secretary of Chinese communist party, spread over internet. He was famous because he was forced to step down after Tiananmen Square crackdown in 1989. I have no intention to discuss the cause and the consequence of that event, neither do I have a judgment of the event. However, some theoretical analyses in terms of revolution do deserve some attentions. What I mean revolution here is not judgmental, as the revolution can be anything."
would appear better this way (further stylistic emendations notwithstanding):
"News OF the death of Mr. Zhao Ziyang, the former S-ecretary-GENERAL of THE Chinese C-ommunist P-arty, spread over THE I-nternet. He was famous because he was forced to step down after Tiananmen Square crackdown in 1989. I have no intention to discuss the cause(S) and the consequence(S) of that event, neither do I have a judgment ON IT. However, some theoretical analyses in terms of revolutionS do deserve some attention0. What I mean BY "revolution" here is not judgmental, as A revolution can be anything."
I have not read the second paragraph yet.