送交者: alvarado 于 2005-12-27, 22:32:14:

回答: 第一段是不是应该更明确、硬朗些？（附上我的改动稿） 由 dafeng 于 2005-12-27, 22:25:26:

citing is rarely seen.
a minor thing is thr repetition: inaccuracy and misinformation
another minor thing: should be "one-sided" story if you insist using the expression

• i'm talking about repetition of the phrase - alvarado (47 bytes) 2005-12-28, 15:24:51
• standard 经常被cited. "inaccuracy and misinformation"用法也常见 - 方舟子 (41 bytes) 2005-12-28, 04:51:42

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