同感。以补充记者的报道的不足为出发点会好些



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送交者: 桂铭 于 2005-12-28, 02:59:47:

回答: 我觉得口气要再缓和点 由 田牛 于 2005-12-28, 01:58:21:

[为读者提供不同的信息],这样的策略和行文,容易为编辑和读者接受,好过直接“纠正”记者的方式。

小建议:

#Here I will correct some mistakes in Mr. Yardley's report, again.

*Here I want to provide some other opinions and facts that Mr. Yardley didn't mention in his article.

#However, a biased and inaccurate report such as Mr. Yardley’s is of no help, if not destructive, for Chinese government and the world as well.

*However a less comprehensive report as Mr. Yardley's on such disputing issue is of no help but misleading the Times readers, also confusing the development rights and strategies of the local residents and administrations along the Nu River.



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