肖传国的综述等于复述?


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送交者: james_hussein_bond 于 2009-12-31, 17:56:48:

肖传国2006年在European Urology上的综述引言中的开头两段分别抄自The Journal of Urology两篇不同的文章。显然前面两篇文章的引言是会讲英文的共同作者帮他写的。肖写综述的时候没有讲英文的共同作者帮忙,只好抄以前的了。

引用:
An Artificial Somatic-Central Nervous System-Autonomic Reflex Pathway for Controllable Micturition After Spinal Cord Injury: Preliminary Results in 15 Patients
The Journal of Urology, Volume 170, Issue 4, Pages 1237-1241
C. XIAO, M. DU, C. DAI, B. LI, V. NITTI, W. de GROAT

Neurogenic voiding dysfunction after spinal cord injury (SCI) is a major problem. In industrialized nations the mortality related to renal problems after SCI has significantly decreased since World War II but morbidity has remained significant, chiefly because of poorly controlled bladder and bowel functions. In underdeveloped countries where medical resources are limited, no significant progress has been reported on the mortality and morbidity of survivors of SCI.

引用:
AN ARTIFICIAL SOMATIC-AUTONOMIC REFLEX PATHWAY PROCEDURE FOR BLADDER CONTROL IN CHILDREN WITH SPINA BIFIDA
The Journal of Urology, Volume 173, Issue 6, Pages 2112-2116
C. XIAO, M. DU, B. LI, Z. LIU, M. CHEN, Z. CHEN, P. CHENG, X. XUE, E. SHAPIRO, H. LEPOR

Abstract
Purpose:
Neurogenic bladder is a major problem for children with spina bifida. Despite rigorous pharmacological and surgical treatment, incontinence, urinary tract infections and upper tract deterioration remain problematic. ......

Neurogenic voiding dysfunction in children with spina bifida is a major problem affecting overall health and quality of life. The combination of pharmacological agents, surgical bladder augmentation and clean intermittent catheterization has limited success. ......


引用:
Reinnervation for Neurogenic Bladder: Historic Review and Introduction of a Somatic-Autonomic Reflex Pathway Procedure for Patients with Spinal Cord Injury or Spina Bifida
European Urology, Volume 49, Issue 1, Pages 22-29
C. Xiao

Neurogenic voiding dysfunction after spinal cord injury (SCI) presents a major medical and social problem. In industrialized nations the mortality related to renal problems after SCI has significantly decreased since World War II, but the morbidity has remained significant, chiefly because of poorly controlled bladder and bowel functions [1,2]. In underdeveloped countries where medical resources are limited, no significant progress has been reported on the mortality and morbidity of SCI survivors.

Another huge population with neurogenic voiding dysfunction is children with spina bifida which effects one per thousand newborns [3]. Despite rigorous pharmacologic and surgical treatment, incontinence, urinary tract infections and upper tract deterioration remains problematic. The combination of pharmacological agents, surgical bladder augmentation and clean intermittent catheterization has limited success [4].

说前面两篇引言是别人帮他写的,是有根据的。他抄的时候,自作聪明地改动了几处。结果改过的部分除了一个拉掉的定冠词外((the) morbidity),全比被抄的原文更差。比如第一句2003年的原文说是a major problem,这没错。肖抄的时候,自以为是地给改成a major medical and social problem,就有问题了。医学问题和社会问题应该不是同一个问题。这是英文太差还是理解力太差?2005年原文用了pharmacological这个词。肖抄改成pharmacologic但是只改了一句忘了改第二句。结果搞成了两个等价形式的混用,非常滑稽。而且这一句话的动词remain是用在三个并列主语上的,原文也没有第三人称单数的s。肖抄给加了一个s,变成了憋脚的Chinglish。




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